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Sometimes things don't work out..
Sometimes you want to see the sun but 
the clouds beat you to it.
Sometimes you want the rain when the sun is
burning you alive.
But the sun burned it all away and now you're 
catching fire.

Sometimes you feel like walking to the end of the plank
but when you've but one foot left on the edge
he pulls you back and you remember that you're loved.

Othertimes, there was no love. 
No one to hold you, and nothing to anchor your soul to hell.

Sometimes things don't work out.
And sometimes they do.
And sometimes it seems like they will work for the last time
and always will.
Forevermore.
Until they just come back and in the heat of desperation, manifest
as your nightmares
and consume you
until..
you're back at square one.

Sometimes you're stronger than othertimes..
and you pull through like you know you always have, and will.

But..
sometimes I think you could do well to know that I'm here too.
And you can always give a little of it to me
everytime.

Sometimes things do work out. 
This really isn't any work of literary genius! So sorry if you expected more haha!
And I'm not that fond of it as a whole quite frankly XD 

I wanted to make something for a good friend of mine who hasn't had the greatest of times as of late. 
But since you don't have any animal characters (that I could find..?) and I wasn't able to pull anything human off digitally.. I decided to write you something for a chance!

So this is for *Nigrecent
But if it applies to you, then it's for you too!
Always open to interpretation though.

I'm not much of a writer/poet ^^;
But I hope you like this. I'm not quite sure where I was going with it or if it even makes sense XD But ahhh!!

Sorry! Haha! But you'll always have my support, Sardine Boy. :3 Stay you :hug:

For those that do not know, I do art!
Requiem for the Living by CapukatI said, Stop by CapukatWhite by Capukat
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very nice work. well done
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013   General Artist
Thank you!
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Lippi-b00gs Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I.LOVE.THIS.

You are AMAZING at bringing out the emotions :iconclapplz:
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013   General Artist
Thanks so much x3
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Lippi-b00gs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your're Welcome :)
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soft-sound Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really know how to express how you feel, all your poems are so romantic and caring...If not slightly sad...
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013   General Artist
Thanks very much x3 :hug: ;u;
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chibi-demon-angel694 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful! :)
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013   General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconchibi-demon-angel694:
chibi-demon-angel694 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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SailorMeowMeow Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful <3
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
thanks!
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EletricSpark Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*Hugs* You're such a poetic genius!!

:iconclapplz:
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
fft thank you x3
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EletricSpark Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No problem
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Moon-Skye Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want to bury myself in your poetic genius.  
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Omg pfff XD
thanks
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Moon-Skye Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;u;

you're welcome!
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sammywammy123 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really quite brilliant! What are you talking about?! <3 Love it :D
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Thank you haha x3
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sammywammy123 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student General Artist
mmhhmm :)
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xXSugarPawXx Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
This is perfect ouo
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Thank you!
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xXSugarPawXx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Welcome c:
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sometimes things work out and sometimes they don't.  Awesome writing.  *^_^*
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Yes ;u;
thanks!
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob~!   *^_^*
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so true! I LOVE THE 2ND STANZA! And this does apply to me. Thank you for writing this. Its great to hear that friends care for each other. You are a writer! Clap 
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Haha thank you so much!
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:iconnanathatha:
NanaThatha Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!
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yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
excellent writing
very passionate and creative and true
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
thank you ;u;'
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I've loved this poem realism sincere, and I was hoping not to repeat too much "Sometimes" Thank you.
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Haha thanks! X3
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I've loved this poem realism sincere, and I was hoping not to repeat too much "Samatmus" Thank you.
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Fallenflame13 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I really like this one. I think I might like it then the other one(not saying the other one is bad I really like that one too but this one just does it for me.>_<) Anyways ~I like this one.
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   General Artist
Thank you very much! haha no probs C:
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ariamisu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
oh my god
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   General Artist
X3
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Nigrecent Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't entirely know how to respond other than a heartfelt thank you.
It takes a lot for me to tear up, but I did a bit.
You didn't have to make me anything. The little hello's and how are you's are what usually make my day. Thank you for everything. Literally everything. If it wasn't for you, you're group you made. The kindness of those you've introduced me to and just overall being more than an inspiration. I know I wouldn't be here right now. And I don't think I could ever thank you enough for it.
Thank you is really all I can say, actually. I'm so sorry I'm.. I'm really at a loss for words.

*big bearhug* ;v;''
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   General Artist
>u< I'm really glad hahaa!
I was afraid you might not like it at first because hopefully it doesn't sound too much like I'm assuming I know how you feel?!
But eeeyup..!
Ah gee, well I'm really glad :3! 
I'm just super super glad I have and still get to know you!

Np Nodii :hug:
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Nigrecent Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haahaha ;v;

Nah, It's the thought that counts and it's more than incredibly sweet. I find it a little ironic at some parts XD; I have a medical condition known as Porphyria. I have to avoid the sun mostly because it gives me seizures, horrible blisters and deformation on my skin, it also gives me horrible attacks where I'm puking and peeing blood XD! Not that you need to know this.
But it's a run-on joke with my group of friends where they say; "Nodin, get out of the sun, you'll catch on fire and burn!" So, your sun metaphor was not only sweet and really did fit how I felt. But it also put a smile on my face and has a literal sense to it. Hahahaha!

;v; thankyou again. And I'm super glad too!
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013   General Artist
Oh right I forgot xnx You'd told me before I think that you can't go out in the sun!

Ahh D:

But I guess I'm glad?!

Haha :hug:
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rainfreezer Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i almost started crying tears in my eyes
it makes me sad that i know how this feels

you're great capu your poetry is great
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   General Artist
;u; If you ever need to talk rain, you know I'm here :hug:

Thank you
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rainfreezer Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you capu!! i will ; ^ ;
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PikaWarriors Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student General Artist
How are you not a poet? Thats better than what I could do!
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Capukat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   General Artist
Haha well I would say I'm a wannabe poet ;p XD jk

ahhh I'm sure not
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PikaWarriors Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student General Artist
xD
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Dautie Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stanza's 1-3 basically sum's up 2013 for me.
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