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Hello again
it's me.
No, not who you were expecting, 
just me.
But look, I'm smiling, for me
for you.

I'm no one pretty, I'm sorry
my smile turns others down
and what sad face I have- they say
Until now it never bothered me- not too much!
But hello again,
it's me.
I haven't seen you in what seems like an eternity
Do you remember?

We used to sit over there- that's right!
That patch of grass and wildflower, the
swing set we'd sit on at night as children,
looking up to the stars- we'd talk about
how one day when we'd fall asleep forever, we'd be among those too.
I would be a star smaller than yours but we'd be stars together, and
you and I would have our special place, in the sky.

But hello again, hello.
I see you're happy, with her. Not me.
And hello again, why don't you look at me
like you used to?
Like you.. used to.
Remember?
We'd talk about a family and children- when we were children!
But of course we knew nothing of what or how it actually-
Oh I apologize, I see now why you left..
How could I be so daft?

Hello again, 
it's been a year
too many.
I still sit on that special place, looking up to the stars at night.
The mischievous twinkle in their single eyes
Oh, we didn't know at the time.
But they weren't shining down on us- no!
They were trying to tell me, 
hello child.
We've seen it all, happen, one time too many
but we didn't tell you, you see, if we told you it would've ended sooner.
Thank us now for your childhood.

Sigh... I suppose it's time I move on.
I used to see so many people, just like you and me!
There were two.. no.. three! Three of them, they said they'd been friends 
since they were like you and me! Like you and me.. years before.
And I said to myself, my gosh! Three! Three, for heaven's sake!
My, if there are so many, then how could I ever lose you, for it's meant to be!
We're meant to be.

Oh my, what a fool I was. What a child
Three. That's three too little.

Hello, are you still listening to me.
Or are you listening to her..
It was nice seeing you again, you know?
I just wanted to say hello, 
it's okay I'm really not sad.
Because look! I'm smiling 
for me,
for you.
Haha another quick one x3
Just shy of 15 min this time..
But I like it more than my previous works..

I'll submit art after this no worries :3 In fact, I'm in the right mood to draw more, if you get what I mean haha!

Leaving this up for interpretation yet again~ Enjoy :)
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Azure-Lugia5 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What a beautiful poem ^^
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Capukat Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   General Artist
thank you X3
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Azure-Lugia5 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome ^^
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SentanaKitsune Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist
I love your poetry! The open-interpretation makes it easy to find myself being the voice in each of your poems. :heart:
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 14, 2013   General Artist
thankq so much X3!!
:D

and aha this is random but I accidentally deleted another commented you'd posted x___X I don't know where it was from but in case I don't find it SORRY i didn't reply ahha
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SentanaKitsune Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist
You're welcome. c;

(Even though you found it, it wouldn't have been a problem. I've had that happen before. xD)
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 16, 2013   General Artist
haha X3!!
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SyerAru Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your poetry is so amazing wow ouo can't wait to read more!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   General Artist
rhankq so much haha!
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BLUEvsFIN Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this one :meow:
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   General Artist
thankq <333
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thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing! So many emotions! ;u;
This sounds like there was a girl and boy, in love as children, then they slowly grew apart as they got older, but the girl was still in love with him, and gets a bit bitter when she sees him with someone else, but she still acts happy and puts on a fake smile for him.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
Thank you!
Ahh yes quite right hehe ;u;!
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thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! ;U;
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cddmanful Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like your key phrase, that you also chose for title....

I also like the stars saying "thank us now for your childhood[...]" as they had forborne telling you the truth back then--lest you grow up too fast... I picture the childhood you [in this] as having an innocent, very happy face, the current one having a sad smile...
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
Thank you, david! C:

Ah gee, well you are a tad too good at interpretation x3
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fredgotshot Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Loving your poetry so far. They have so much meaning to them.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much ;u;
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:iconitrakat:
Itrakat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
That's why I'm never getting close to anyone ever again ;(
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
noo trust me
I've thuoght the same
just keep giving plp chances :3
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Chocukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
ahh this sounds all too familiar to me.. ;;
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
;u; :hug: ;~;
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Chocukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
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<3 ;v;
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SSUMA Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of childhood friends, the ones you never talk to again after elementary school
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xxSkyfrost Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yah me too :( )even though I only just finished elementry xD)
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SSUMA Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lolz xD You notice right after though, or at least I did.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
>~< yea.. good times
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SSUMA Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
>.< I still kinda miss some of them..
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
;u; me too
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SSUMA Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yah </3
Awesome piece of literature though!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thanks haha x3
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SSUMA Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem~
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CandiedKittens Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It sounds as if a girl is taking to a boy, about how they where in love as children. And then they broke up, but the girl still loved him. Now years later, she comes and sees how the boy is happy without her, and smiles anyway because her love is happy.

Again, beautifully written. I love it.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
Wow...

well you got that most all spot on!
:D

and thank you >~<
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SombraTheWolf Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this is really brilliant. Your writing is as fantastic as your art. I don't think I knew that.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much wow haha that means a lot >~<
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NestledInBrambles Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It kind of sounds like a girl and a boy or something like that... o3o
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
girl talking to a boy!
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NestledInBrambles Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, that's what I meant :3
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PawZee Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ALL DEM FEELS :iconcryforeverplz:
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
>~<
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redwolfMOON123 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
every one smile
why wasteyour time being depresed and shit
just smile and live life to the fullest
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
haha :highfive:
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redwolfMOON123 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
hahahha its true
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