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Hello again
it's me.
No, not who you were expecting, 
just me.
But look, I'm smiling, for me
for you.

I'm no one pretty, I'm sorry
my smile turns others down
and what sad face I have- they say
Until now it never bothered me- not too much!
But hello again,
it's me.
I haven't seen you in what seems like an eternity
Do you remember?

We used to sit over there- that's right!
That patch of grass and wildflower, the
swing set we'd sit on at night as children,
looking up to the stars- we'd talk about
how one day when we'd fall asleep forever, we'd be among those too.
I would be a star smaller than yours but we'd be stars together, and
you and I would have our special place, in the sky.

But hello again, hello.
I see you're happy, with her. Not me.
And hello again, why don't you look at me
like you used to?
Like you.. used to.
Remember?
We'd talk about a family and children- when we were children!
But of course we knew nothing of what or how it actually-
Oh I apologize, I see now why you left..
How could I be so daft?

Hello again, 
it's been a year
too many.
I still sit on that special place, looking up to the stars at night.
The mischievous twinkle in their single eyes
Oh, we didn't know at the time.
But they weren't shining down on us- no!
They were trying to tell me, 
hello child.
We've seen it all, happen, one time too many
but we didn't tell you, you see, if we told you it would've ended sooner.
Thank us now for your childhood.

Sigh... I suppose it's time I move on.
I used to see so many people, just like you and me!
There were two.. no.. three! Three of them, they said they'd been friends 
since they were like you and me! Like you and me.. years before.
And I said to myself, my gosh! Three! Three, for heaven's sake!
My, if there are so many, then how could I ever lose you, for it's meant to be!
We're meant to be.

Oh my, what a fool I was. What a child
Three. That's three too little.

Hello, are you still listening to me.
Or are you listening to her..
It was nice seeing you again, you know?
I just wanted to say hello, 
it's okay I'm really not sad.
Because look! I'm smiling 
for me,
for you.
Haha another quick one x3
Just shy of 15 min this time..
But I like it more than my previous works..

I'll submit art after this no worries :3 In fact, I'm in the right mood to draw more, if you get what I mean haha!

Leaving this up for interpretation yet again~ Enjoy :)
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Azure-Lugia5 Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What a beautiful poem ^^
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Capukat Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
thank you X3
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Azure-Lugia5 Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome ^^
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:iconsentanakitsune:
I love your poetry! The open-interpretation makes it easy to find myself being the voice in each of your poems. :heart:
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Capukat May 14, 2013  Student General Artist
thankq so much X3!!
:D

and aha this is random but I accidentally deleted another commented you'd posted x___X I don't know where it was from but in case I don't find it SORRY i didn't reply ahha
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:iconsentanakitsune:
You're welcome. c;

(Even though you found it, it wouldn't have been a problem. I've had that happen before. xD)
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat May 16, 2013  Student General Artist
haha X3!!
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Aruneva May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your poetry is so amazing wow ouo can't wait to read more!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat May 13, 2013  Student General Artist
rhankq so much haha!
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BLUEvsFIN May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like this one :meow:
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