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Passion.

When you do something because your gut tells you to

When you do something for the love of doing it

When you do something with no monetary goals.

Love 

is When it doesn’t matter how many times you talk to someone,              

                Every time you do it again, it’s a new, exciting, experience

When you do your job without ever having to work

When you can look in the mirror and feel pride without vanity

When a smile is on your face and you don’t know how it got there.

Happiness

The state of being when you

                do what you Love, and Love what you Do;

                                have Love and Passion in your Life;

                                                live Life like there’s no tomorrow

Life

is only complete when you’re Happy

Just a short poem I wrote aha ^-^ After a small talk in class about the definition of work once you find something you truly love to do :) And of course the quote~!
(tho I don't have it atm, I seem to have forgotten the exact words/author x__x)

But aha enjoy ;D

Haha this was written in a matter of 20-30 minutes so I know it isn't very refined or anything ^-^'
But I'm looking forward to feedback and all still :'D But err, critiques as always are welcome though I'm sure of my abundant mistakes already >u>
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:icondragondoodler11:
Dragondoodler11 Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is amazing!
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LylatheGlaceon Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are good at poetry :3
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LupusAzulli Dec 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh capu

youre such a talented person
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:iconisttyrr:
You've discovered something very important. Hold on to what you learned and keep it with you, especially when times get difficult.
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Capukat Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
//late reply gosh sorry D;
but yes ;~; that's what I live by aha
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DarthDrea Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Good Job! fantastic
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cddmanful Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the general message of this! My favorite line in it is "When you can look in the mirror and feel pride without vanity" because that says it so well!

"Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life." - - Confucius

As a critique, and I know you didn't take as much time as you might have, I would say it would be worth it to clean up the layout of this, and make some kind of more organized pattern--for example, the line "When you do something without....[etc.]" it probably should be on the same line, because it looks, as it is, like it is one of the headings you were doing. I suspect you may have thoughts like this already, and I don't know your original intent, of course....
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Capukat Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
ahh late reply sorry D;

but ahah thanks ;v;

tho yeaa xD Idk I'm not that into writing so I didn't pay attention
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cddmanful Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its ok--I am slightly (well, more than slightly) embarrassed to be about the only one that did anything "critique-y". Now I feel like I sound like some kind of poetry-nazi, which I most assuredly am NOT.... I can barely make decent free-verse, let alone rhyming/metrical poetry....
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Capukat Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
xDD oh nono it's finee hahaha
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