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Let’s play Dress Up

And I’ll play as someone Happy

Let’s dress Up

And let this all… wash down.

 

Let’s make it Halloween today!

Every day!

Let’s, you and me, switch roles.

Stop smiling like you know what I’m about to do,

You shouldn’t be happy you know.

It’s your job to stay inside and be sad,

I’ll play you, today.

Every day!

 

Don’t let anyone see you!

There can’t be two of us, of you, of me.

So remember,

While I’m you,

You have to make sure no one sees you.

Don’t peek out of the windows, okay?

If you accidentally show yourself, I won’t forgive you.

A game isn’t fun if you can’t follow the rules.

Life’s a game y’know?

 

Just stay inside and try to not make a sound,

I can still hear you,

Stop crying,

Don’t do that.

 

I’ll be back,

Just let me enjoy myself

Or at least pretend to.

 

Hey, what are you doing?

Hey! That’s not fair, get back where you belong.

Can’t you go away?

I don’t need you!

I like my costume!

I don’t want to play dress up anymore, I want to keep this!

 

Hey! Give that back!

Give it…

 

I know; it was never mine.

I’m..sorry….

Can we play again tomorrow? 

Haha not very long...
I should spend more time on my writing..

Haha well I can't say I do this to perfect it I suppose to the extent I do with my art.

5-8 minutes

But then again I only write when I really have the inspiration to, and so I suppose some things I get out through writing have been kept in for far longer than the time it takes to put it into words..

Enjoy! Free interpretation, as always :) Even though I have my own~
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:iconkillzonekrissy:
killzonekrissy Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
fantastic! :) I've definitely lived this as well, it seems like a never-ending inner monologue.
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   General Artist
Thank you so much! Ah most definitely x3
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:iconmulta21:
Multa21 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whos perspective is this from?
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013   General Artist
I suppose mine haha
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:iconpistachiofox:
PistachioFox Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love this one, I have a feeling I've played a similar game...
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013   General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconpistachiofox:
PistachioFox Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome!
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cddmanful Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I will just say I have lived this, a little at least~~I won't try to analyze [wonder of wonders!] because I feel it would damage the source, a little bit. All I will say, is the person whose field of thought this is, ought to have someone know well, simultaneously, the player of both roles...
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Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013   General Artist
haha!!!
But ah yes you could say that :3
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:iconcddmanful:
cddmanful Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think such a person could help the role-players sort out the roles, a little bit, by knowing from the outside what goes on....
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013   General Artist
Lol oh gosh xD Good point
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XxTwilightCryxX Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student General Artist
This is...really well done. I feel as if I were the person telling "you" to stay away, as this is what I go through. Oye, I'm sorry to bother you with this, I'll just be going now. ^^'
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013   General Artist
Thank you haha X3
omg nooothanks for commenting :D
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SorbetBerry Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist
Wow, I love it...
the way I see it, the person (speaker) feels the need to hide their inner emotions by wearing a "costume" of cheerfulness. The person they are talking to ("you") is also a part of them; their inner emotions, that they are telling to go away and hide.
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013   General Artist
thanks egg! <3
omg ;u; well yes ^-^ in a way!!!
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:iconnekothebro:
Nekothebro Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really powerful, and it's a very lovely piece. Fantastic work!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013   General Artist
Thank you >~<!!
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:iconrsbh:
Rsbh Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow this is amazing :)
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013   General Artist
Thanks haha!
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:iconrsbh:
Rsbh Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np :)
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HerosBane2854 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I found this quite interesting and insightful :3 At first I was confused about what was going on, but I think I got something. I interpret as, not really a split personality deal, but as like letting one side of oneself be "active" and "open" to the world while the other side is hidden. That is only until one's "true self" comes out... Kind of like a mask versus one's real face I guess...

I ramble. Sorry ^^; Just my interpretation
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Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013   General Artist
Prettyyy much ^-^ Haha

well np thank you for sharing :D
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Hetaria-wa-sugoidesu Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013   General Artist
Thankq X3
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Hetaria-wa-sugoidesu Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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XiaoDarkCloud Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice! Ur really good at writing!! 8U
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013   General Artist
Thankq!
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XiaoDarkCloud Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Np. :)
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