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to try and smile when they're gunning me down and
I won't tell you until I'm full of empty shells that
the world wasn't built on land but on
suffering and
a lack of better term for human desire for satisfaction that does not exist.

To be optimistic when one's soul is a realist but
it doesn't matter how many petals you count because
the last draw will always end with a dead end that
takes you to a new beginning where at first you feel.. 
this is it. And I'm going to make this my
home.. If not for the eyes that prey on your identity while perched on
trees that take root on ground made of greed and
suffering.

Is happiness a paradoxical conspiracy that finds salvation in the dreaming minds of those awake. Or perhaps just
something I have only caressed but never tasted to
remember.

Is suffering that which is beyond the first dream that 
we all awaken to after sleeping that first sleep when 
we break free of Innocence.

Or are my words not but images that you have unconsciously crafted as a way to assure yourself that you are not 
alone. Or me. 

To be out of mind when I am but sane and not blankly
staring at the beautifully painted walls. Unfortunately 
all I see is white.

I must've missed the bloodstain..
Do we speak truly when we are under emotional stress and hide ourselves when we block it out and pretend it's fine?

I didn't have the time for vent art so I whipped this up to relax a bit and end the day.

Now back to homework! 

Interpret how you will, I'm no poet and this is pretty much just what came to mind in the past 20 or so minutes XD Aiee so I apologize to all you amazing poets and writers if this is an incomprehensible mess.

Nevertheless, have fun reading? ^^; 

I usually do art! (If you are wondering if I attempt poetry as a serious thing---nope! That would be rather embarrassing now wouldn't it)

Pippin Portrait + SPEEDPAINT! by CapukatI said, Stop by CapukatWatercolor Headshot by Capukat
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wordslikewater Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ahh... that was beautiful ;o;
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Art-e86 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Like it. Like it a lot. Your art-work looks phenomenal too.
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Mistermonstarr Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it
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Personghost Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Trust me you're definitely more talented than many a writer out there. If you ever did decide to be a poet you would rockHeart Clap 
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lightfaith0606 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Very lovely! I can totally relate to this!!
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Sniper-Rin Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
"empty shells"
I think you mean bullets.
Because the shells are not the projectiles.

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Capukat Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014   General Artist
I was debating over that. 
Hmm.. I'm aware that shells are the casings but I've heard/seen it used as almost a slang word for ammunition in general. 
Although haha I don't know much about it XD
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Kitzy2011 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
It needs to be a song.
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ltpatato Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
incomprehensible mess?
(im no writer, BUT THIS IS AMAZING HOW CAN YOU SAY DAT ;A; )
relatable on many levels ;3;
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Fallenflame13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
I know this feeling very well... Very well done...
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Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are a really good writer :)

This sounds like someone who wishes for the end. Not someone who is suicidal, but one who... Just doesn't care whether or not today is their last day. That's how I interpret this, and how I feel everyday.
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TheFastAndFurious Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Inspiration within poetry <33
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GEISTpa Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Powered by Conspiracy
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synchrosen Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're good with words, I'm tellin you <3
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Sketchie13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This really rings true with me. 
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zeraan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014   Digital Artist
You are seriously amazing at writing.
The words you use are wonderful and so deep.
I feel like those phrases are full of meaning and emotions.
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Youna13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Photographer
I really like it, maybe you should change when you end the lines, yours are too full. With smaller lines the words get more meaning.

But beside this there is nothing bad about it - instead I really love it. There such a deepness, honesty and meaning behind your words. You get touched by the sadness.

Really wonderful, you should really write more =)
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T-art-freak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Wow! Really moving!
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vanilleass Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Capu, your writing has a lot of deep meaning and really pierces into me. Yet truly is inspiring <3
Hope you feel better <3
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
(To be out of mind when I am but sane and not blankly)
very nice,The text endorsed despite the sadness,thanks
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demon-rawr Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
These words have caged my soul in a way no other can explain. It is heart warming, yet rips my emotions into terrible thought. You, my friend, are beautiful with words. I can expect no more then the frame you have just shined light on. Nicely done.
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shaina773 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Celine you are such an amazing artist, writer and person, this is really amazing piece, thank you for sharing it!
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Aeixel Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautifully written, I love your writing. Keep up the great work! c:
As someone who loves poetry and is trying to write more meaningful things, this is inspiring. 
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EcferusAnima Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like your poetry! You should make it more often if you enjoy doing it.
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