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Numbness

I can’t feel my toes and at first I think

It’s just my toes.

I can cover them up.

I can warm them.

 

It spreads, like fire,

Like ice.

I glance away for a second, it seems, and my feet are cold

Pat –pat

That’s funny, I didn’t feel that

Maybe I’ll cover them up too

I’ll warm them up.

 

I’ll take a nap

Maybe a short rest will make it all better, warm them

Up…

What’s that? How long has it been?

My legs… are you still mine..

Why has my breath left me, short?

Has everything but deserted me?

 

What about you, are you still here?

Are you still with me?

Hello?

And before I can say goodbye, I think my thoughts are leaving me too –

I might back one of those tag things for my literature lol xD I justtt might..

I write when I can't draw something to express myself , literally. No pun intended :3 lol
(becausecoughI'msuppsedtobedoinghwandatabletismoreobviousthantyping)

Yea, enjoy!
Just a quick spontaneous one again C: 'bout 10-15 min; I really should spend more time but I don't even know what I'd be spending time for haha...

I'll leave this up for interpretation, but ahh.. hint hint.. this is also an allusion to something else I personally feel, but that's where you guys get to take this any way you want :)
Enjoy~

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xxSkyfrost Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It makes me think, no of actual frostbite but of someone just feeling lost and confused. At the beginning, they're just starting to feel confused, but than it just steadily goes downhill, and then at the last paragraph, when it says,
"What about you, are you still here?
Are you still with me?
Hello?
And before I can say goodbye, I think my thoughts are leaving me too –" it sounds like they're turning to the person they most rely on, wondering if they're still there for them to help sort out the confusion. Then at the very last line, I think they can't find anyone to talk to or anything that makes sense, worrying that they're going crazy.

I don't know though, maybe its really just about literall frost bite ^^; its just my interpretation.
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Capukat Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   General Artist
That's a very close interpretation too to the sort of gist I was going after >~<

Mmm ;u;
well that's great aha thank you!
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cddmanful Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This one scares me, a little bit--makes me think of dying....I hope whatever you personally feel isn't that devastating to you, but it must be kinda bad...:tears:
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 21, 2013   General Artist
x3 hehe sort of yeaaa

I suppose, and you're analytical as per usual !
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18eragon4ever Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I got frostbite once . . . My toes turned purple! It wasn't very fun. T-T
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 20, 2013   General Artist
eemetoooo *^*
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18eragon4ever Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Us frostbite victims haz to stick together!
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SilverStar102200 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is great!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 20, 2013   General Artist
thankq!
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SilverStar102200 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope, i don't need any thanks :D
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