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Life has become a dead weight;

What is Love? When all is Hate.

What once was a peaceful dream so

Lucid, so daring, so bold!

Now but remnants of a past-to-be-forgotten, I’m told.

 

As a child, I knew not of you,

What was false, or on the other hand, true

As eyes turn on me, cold,

You alone take me in your arms and hold

On to what is left of a little girl who never made it out

Of that dream to be forgotten.

 

I thought things were forever

Dare I say anything could die, for that was never.

But life is a funny thing, you know?

You believe so strongly in Now that when you look back..

Now was only Then and then you thought things were perfect

But as it passed, your view collapses. It shatters. Like a cracked window,

The view you saw, now distorted. Contorted. Deformed. Horrific.

 

I still believe in you. Even though all that has come to past has been nothing but true

And true it is, true with all the evil life could do

Though I look at you now, through seemingly flawless glass I see a friend;

And I smile for you are smiling too

But what I do not see is that crack in the glass.

An imperfection just begging to be forgotten.

EDIT: wow thanks so much for all the feedback! I did not expect this haha :la: I couldn't really believe my poem was on the front page for over a day under the 24 hour one... :hug: Thank you! I might write some more in between art xD
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Another poem.. :3
I still have so much work haha so I haven't had the chance to really draw
since I'm working mostly on comic concepts traditionally (messy messyy sketches xD)

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But anyway!
Just another fun one to write. Over a span of about an hour, with a multitude of breaks xDD
I'm not too sure what this one is about either, yet I have a gist of why I wrote it but once again, it's better I leave this up for interpretation :3
Enjoy!
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MochiFace Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I was playing back to December by Taylor Swift

So Sad!
LoveWithABrokenHeart Gloomy Emotes - Kappa Cries Why do you make me sad with your beautiful stories?
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Capukat Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   General Artist
Haha.. x3

Aw why I'm glad you umm.. like it though!?! XD
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MochiFace Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Is I love it I made it a fave XD
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Sadly-mortal Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Another poem of yours that floors me, such a rhythm and flow. Makes you want to forget the invention of punctuation and let all the words crash together like waves on a beach.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 18, 2013   General Artist
Well thank you so much! ^-^

I'm really glad you like them!
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18eragon4ever Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*sniffle* I luv it! so brilliant!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
thankq x3
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18eragon4ever Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
(Thumbs up) ur welcome
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jjgirl99 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was just-just-there are no words!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
Thankq x3
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jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No prob!
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abominationwolf Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...very deep. I applaud you.
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
thankq so much !
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abominationwolf Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, just beautiful.
And so deep! ;U;
Amazing job!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
thank you X3
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HanOneSail Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderfully written.
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thankq!
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HanOneSail Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no problem, read any of my poems anytime.
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CodaBear48 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Artist
:D
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
X3
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IceLuxray Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful and awe-some~ :heart: :)
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you!
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meowcateatsyou Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
This is an amazing poem! It is very well made! You very much deserve to be featured! I applaud you and your work. I hope to read more from you!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much!

oh that means a lot thanks >~<
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meowcateatsyou Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
You are very welcome!
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domenace Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i wish i could write like this! You're really talented in my opinion, keep writing!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much >~<
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
I really like the glass thing, especially the last two lines : D
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you haha!
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Np! :3
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icecream234 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well written poem that shows how hard we try to forget about our imperfection and others to try and be happy
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much >~<! haha
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icecream234 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :D!!! i enjoyed it alot
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turtumy Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Oh wow Capu! I was scrolling through the front page, and stopped to read this, becuase I read all poetry I run into. I was scrolling down and saw your name! I had no idea! This is really great!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
wow well thank you!! amgggg
>~< thanks turry that means a lot
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turtumy Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
you're welcome :)
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AbbyElena Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Interpretation... i guess mine would be that a childhood friend told a horrible lie that makes you wounder if she ever spoke the truth but you still want to forgive and just ignore the crack that will lead to a much needed end to that friendship... at least thats what i understood, nicely done poem by the way :)
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
MM interesting ^-^

well thank you! hha
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AbbyElena Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist
you are very welcome! ;)
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candylover75 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing, and I thought my poetry was so good! Outstanding, it really made me think.
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
amgg haha I'm not much of a poet >~<'

but thank you!
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StardustWingsLight Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful and very powerful in my opinion. Amazing work, and I hope you continue to write more poems! :3
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much ;u;

>~<!!!
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StardustWingsLight Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle:
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littlemisssparkles Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
This is wonderful!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank you!
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RoadToWhatever Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thanks!~
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bad.
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