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            My name’s Willy –at least that’s what Denny calls me. My full name is actually William Ross Fitchens. I call her Denny coz I guess.. I do. (I think it’s maybe because I feel like we fit together; kind of matchy, y’know? ..That probably sounds really lame –don’t tell her.) It’s actually Dakota with a capital ‘D’ for Dumb.  I should really call her Dumb instead. I mean, it makes her face contort into this weird half smile half.. frown really. It’s kind of cute. I guess she can’t decide whether she’s offended or just cutting me some slack for having to deal with her lack of wits. I mean really. But what can I do when I can’t hold her eyes for any longer than a second anymore. Gosh and what an airhead. I told her before, you know, that I liked her. You know what she said? “Willy, you know you’re kinda slow at these things. I like you too!” And with that blinding bright smile of hers that got three guys to ask her to prom last year, she just laughs as if I’m the one who’s just starting to understand the basics of human interaction and stuff. I mean for god’s sake, I could hardly look at her when telling her I liked her. She ended up going out with the one guy with the Elvis hair. They didn’t date for long though.. probably because he was so out-of-date. I guess that tops the list of why she doesn’t have her eye on good looking me. I think my humor died with my soprano voice back when puberty decided it would waltz into my life. But hey, she’s missing out really. Sure I drive a rundown Honda Civic from like 10,000 BC; but I mean I ain’t too shabby with the other girls. They tend to admire my gray eyes from afar until eye contact happens and it’s like the zombies suddenly rain down and they quickly dart away. Something like that..

            Well. Denny. Just so you know, I like you. I mean like you. I like the way you pretend to get upset when I tell you that you must’ve been dropped as a baby. Or the way you violently pluck the petals off every flower in sight. And perhaps even the way you play with the ends of your hair when you’re tired of listening to Dr. Marla ramble on about how physics is what keeps our “ungrateful teenage butts” down on these chairs. I could go on but I guess I’m too lazy to think right now.

            You’re just.. Dakota. Girls are so complicated. If only you get it. 

    I love you.

Just a short improv/something I wrote in between homework.

I had "platonic" stuck in my head and though this isn't exactly a platonic relationship between William and Dakota.. I suppose it is. But one-sided.

Nothing profound. Just brain-diarrhea from stress induced insanity. 

Nonetheless I hope you enjoy my (failure) of an attempt to write from a guy's perspective for once. 

And for those that don't know.. I am an (aspiring) artist and most definitely not a (good) writer!

Smirks and baseball caps by CapukatPippin Portrait + SPEEDPAINT! by CapukatWhite by Capukat
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BBChild Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014   Traditional Artist
Omgh XD  This was comical.  Loved itttt. 
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toastysun125 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Awwwwww! :heart:

Love it!! :love:
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Nigrecent Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh this was a great read! It sucks that writing and poetry isn't as commonly liked in comparison so other forms of art.

I really like the perspective in this, the little cute bits of romance, I just really like the character William. But, I sorta feel bad for em' in a way as well. ;v; Oh the sappy sweetness hehehe~ Fantastic job!
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BluePawProductions Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014   General Artist
:D Awww, this was sad but cute. <3 ^-^ Very nice writing. :D It has a lot of personality.
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Sketchie13 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still a nice story. I like it.
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andripc Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
awwww
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Itrakat Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Winny...
I like that ship(and it's name)!XD
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Rainiila Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice! I really like it :3
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Ketchup-Master Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh man no Celine ur a really good writer! i think you should write more blurb-y short story type stuff like this!

I LIVE for this kind of writing omg, i love reading perspectives and originals, ughhh

and i really like your style-- this kind of stuff as well as your more prose-y type things. so i'm always excited to see new art from you, but eee i hope you'll be writing more soon! :D :D
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yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
romantic ^^
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