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You make me laugh,
you make me cry,
you make me pretty in my mind
and to everything else, blind.
But out of all the things you do, you've
made me love you.

Like your shadow when you walk
past, I follow the steps you take, I 
walk in your shoes, I 
understand you. Sometimes it's
not as comfortable as I
would like but I do it because you've
made me love you.

I know that my jokes aren't funny
and that I may be sensitive and emotional
and I'm not really anybody beautiful
and as positive as you make me be for you I
still see the truth in the world.
Even if it's not happy but you've
made me love you. 
And I'd do anything for you.

But you don't know I love you the way I do and in fact you
must not know. Because I fear you wouldn't love me
Not the way I love you.
I'll never tell you until you tell me first but,
but what if you're just feeling the same about me but
what if you're thinking these same thoughts then
who goes first?
you wouldn't love me. Not in a thousand years should
I wait every day. At least I don't think so, you see, because
you've made me love you.
And I will always love you for who you are even if it's someone I feel
deserves more than to be with me.

Oh. I wish I could tell you, oh how I wish I had the courage to!
And yet here I sit, watching you be who you are. 
Someone I know everyone loves.
But not the way I do.
Not the way I love you.

Yet again, here
I sit. Listening to you talk about all the others
who I realize like you too even if you don't realize it
and I am so sad. Because really, 
really I just want to show you that I love you.
In a way they don't because I know you and
sometimes I wish I had the courage to say this to you.

But I don't. Because you've
made me love you.

And haha I'm not sure if I should make an account for literature since I don't write too often soo.. xD haha!

Wellllll, you know between all the fictional things I obsess over,
from my own novels to just about anything,
I still live in a world of my own sometimes. Where my emotions just go crazy wOw *^*

And haha this was written far too quickly to be anything of any "greatness" but let's just say
I had a sudden motivation to write this. Like I was urged to but I don't know.
Same way I feel about spontaneous art I make sometimes.
I get inspired by.. things I guess :D, haha I love writing but I seldom do..
(because I'm really not that good haha but I really like it anyway xDD)
It helps express things when I can't draw (like when I'm doing hw cough)

Anyway! I'll leave this open for interpretation c:
Or any similar accounts you all might've had with *dramatic voice* first love :iconsobplz: which sometimes is the last I guess for you lucky poops peeps.

But we can all have fun sharing our drama stories right? :D

But as for why I wrote this, I can't say I'm too sure either and like many of the things I create I probably wouldn't say because.. that takes some of the art away from it...doesn't it? :3

Time: About 20 min, give or take a few x___X
(yeaaa I should've spent more but I was itching to submitt haha for no reason at all xD)
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TonightMyHeartAwakes May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic.. I've written a similar poem (Falling In), you might be able to sympathize. do check it out!
It seems like someone's got you good. You're prolly floating off the floor if the person ever said hello :D lol
I love such poetry though. I tire of reading about pain because I've written a lot of lonely poems!
Reading this is a great change
Amazing job!
Capukat May 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you haha!
Ooh yes just read it :D I like the line you start each stanza with ^-^
lol xD Haha
I can't say that's ever happened lol

but yeaa haa
well thank you !
yours are fantastic as well!
TonightMyHeartAwakes May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
VanillaDumpling May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds a LOT like Miley Cyrus's song 7 Things XD
Capukat May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
xD I don't listen to miley cyrus irkk...
so I can't saw I know what it sounds like .__./
VanillaDumpling May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, part of the chorus goes...
"You make me laugh, you make me cry
I don't know which side to buy
Your friends they're jerks
And when you act like them, just know it hurts
I wanna be with the one I know
And the seventh thing I hate the most that you do
You make me love you"

And I just thought the start of this sounded like it. :)
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thelordoftheforest May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! This is beautiful! Good job! So many feels... ;U; Your poetry's really good!

But I guess, as people say, 'It's better to love and lost then have never loved before'
Capukat May 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!

and yes haha C:
thelordoftheforest May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! =D
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