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You make me laugh,
you make me cry,
you make me pretty in my mind
and to everything else, blind.
But out of all the things you do, you've
made me love you.

Like your shadow when you walk
past, I follow the steps you take, I 
walk in your shoes, I 
understand you. Sometimes it's
not as comfortable as I
would like but I do it because you've
made me love you.

I know that my jokes aren't funny
and that I may be sensitive and emotional
and I'm not really anybody beautiful
and as positive as you make me be for you I
still see the truth in the world.
Even if it's not happy but you've
made me love you. 
And I'd do anything for you.

But you don't know I love you the way I do and in fact you
must not know. Because I fear you wouldn't love me
back. 
Not the way I love you.
I'll never tell you until you tell me first but,
but what if you're just feeling the same about me but
what if you're thinking these same thoughts then
who goes first?
But
you wouldn't love me. Not in a thousand years should
I wait every day. At least I don't think so, you see, because
you've made me love you.
And I will always love you for who you are even if it's someone I feel
deserves more than to be with me.

Oh. I wish I could tell you, oh how I wish I had the courage to!
And yet here I sit, watching you be who you are. 
Someone I know everyone loves.
But not the way I do.
Not the way I love you.

Yet again, here
I sit. Listening to you talk about all the others
who I realize like you too even if you don't realize it
and I am so sad. Because really, 
really I just want to show you that I love you.
In a way they don't because I know you and
sometimes I wish I had the courage to say this to you.

But I don't. Because you've
made me love you.

And haha I'm not sure if I should make an account for literature since I don't write too often soo.. xD haha!



Wellllll, you know between all the fictional things I obsess over,
from my own novels to just about anything,
I still live in a world of my own sometimes. Where my emotions just go crazy wOw *^*

And haha this was written far too quickly to be anything of any "greatness" but let's just say
I had a sudden motivation to write this. Like I was urged to but I don't know.
Same way I feel about spontaneous art I make sometimes.
I get inspired by.. things I guess :D, haha I love writing but I seldom do..
(because I'm really not that good haha but I really like it anyway xDD)
It helps express things when I can't draw (like when I'm doing hw cough)

Anyway! I'll leave this open for interpretation c:
Or any similar accounts you all might've had with *dramatic voice* first love :iconsobplz: which sometimes is the last I guess for you lucky poops peeps.

But we can all have fun sharing our drama stories right? :D

But as for why I wrote this, I can't say I'm too sure either and like many of the things I create I probably wouldn't say because.. that takes some of the art away from it...doesn't it? :3


Time: About 20 min, give or take a few x___X
(yeaaa I should've spent more but I was itching to submitt haha for no reason at all xD)
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:icontonightmyheartawakes:
TonightMyHeartAwakes Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic.. I've written a similar poem (Falling In), you might be able to sympathize. do check it out!
It seems like someone's got you good. You're prolly floating off the floor if the person ever said hello :D lol
I love such poetry though. I tire of reading about pain because I've written a lot of lonely poems!
Reading this is a great change
Amazing job!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 16, 2013   General Artist
Thank you haha!
Ooh yes just read it :D I like the line you start each stanza with ^-^
lol xD Haha
I can't say that's ever happened lol

but yeaa haa
well thank you !
yours are fantastic as well!
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TonightMyHeartAwakes Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
Thanks
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VanillaDumpling Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds a LOT like Miley Cyrus's song 7 Things XD
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   General Artist
xD I don't listen to miley cyrus irkk...
so I can't saw I know what it sounds like .__./
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:iconvanilladumpling:
VanillaDumpling Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, part of the chorus goes...
"You make me laugh, you make me cry
I don't know which side to buy
Your friends they're jerks
And when you act like them, just know it hurts
I wanna be with the one I know
And the seventh thing I hate the most that you do
You make me love you"

And I just thought the start of this sounded like it. :)
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:iconthelordoftheforest:
thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! This is beautiful! Good job! So many feels... ;U; Your poetry's really good!

But I guess, as people say, 'It's better to love and lost then have never loved before'
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 11, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much!

and yes haha C:
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:iconthelordoftheforest:
thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! =D
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turtumy Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
I remember feeling like this....
Then I was ditched for another girl who he asked out while we were still dating and he treats better
Ah well. He was a jerk anyways. So I burned the necklace he gave me for my birthday! :dummy:
Problem solved right? ...ha... not quite.
Ever wish you could just stop caring about something? Yeah, I really wish that.

Capu. Continue writing. This is really good! The line break is interesting, and I love the repetition of the line "You've made me love you"!
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
amg
:c I'm sorry to hear that
amggg wow haha!
and yea I know what you mean C:

and thank you so much >~<

haha thankss turry!!!!
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:iconturtumy:
turtumy Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
yeah well... oh well

You're welcome Capu! :dummy:
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:iconjustawhore:
justawhore Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Do anything for me? ANYTHING BUT OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR WHEN i BEGGEG TO SEE YOU. DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW. YOU MADE ME BELIEVE YOU,TOLD ME I WAS SAFE,AND LIED/BETRAYED ME AGAIN. If you dont come to the marriot and fuck me, I will include others and make you watch. Think I am playing? Fuck me over again. i am so embarrassed to have ever known you. you fuck others but not me? I will be the last you see. Promise. Its going to hurt. Promise
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
>~< I'm sorry what?

okayy then haha
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:iconaevei:
aevei Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
im cry
capoop this is gorg
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thank youu massss <3
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:iconchocukat:
Chocukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
omg <3333
eeeee
This is lovely ;V;<3
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
thankq haha!!!!
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Fallenflame13 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Omg~ This is really nice... I know how this feels...
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thank you!
haha!
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44Eclipse Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
This is wonderful
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thankq!
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:iconmacnroo:
MacNroo Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so beautifully written, it perfectly displays that emotion most of us have had & also, I KNOW THAT FEEL!!!!!! .0.
guess I'm one of the lucky ones though because he felt the same way & also said it first :blush:
now we're pooping baby kittens out of this air & tacos together :dummy:
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much x3

omggggggg LOL
xDD
well d'aww congratulations :3
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MacNroo Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! x3
& thank ye for the llama also :la:
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 10, 2013   General Artist
np!!
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Sketchy-Cat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a beautiful poem, Capu! Q A Q <333
I think your amazing at writing, and if you we're to make a literature account I would absolutely watch you! No doubt! uwu <33
(And seems like great lyrics to a song! XD)
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Sketchy-Cat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I think it does haha. XD
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
Thank you haha!

amgg I might >~<

loll I don't even know how that would work really!
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:iconslshies:
slshies Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
I will go and cry in a hole now this is beautiful it's exactly how i feel well i will go now :'(
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thanks haha
aw don't cry D:
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:iconslshies:
slshies Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
your welcome



How could i not cry from my ugliness and stupidity and everything that i hate about myself...
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
it's okay sometimes I feel the same way!

and that's when I depend on my best friend to bring me back up!! You'll be fine :hug:
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slshies Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
i hope
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CandiedKittens Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This almost made me cry, I understand, totally. I love this, it's amazingly written and is very deep. Please keep writing, you're very good at it!
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much >~<
I'm glad you think so!
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CandiedKittens Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem~ >w<
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Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thank you so much!

omg ;~:
well best wishes >~<
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:iconthehiddenfan:
TheHiddenFan Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
You're amazing. Please keep up the good work
~A fellow poet :)
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
thank you!
amg I'm not poet haha
but thanks!
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:iconcddmanful:
cddmanful Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful, and had you not said (or implied) that you dashed it off too quick, I would have thought you worked carefully over it.....I think your urge to write this was real, and worth obeying! Someone needed to hear this....
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
Thank you haha!
Yea I was bored and was kinda just sitting idly sooo yea
o___O
but amg well glad you think so!

lol apparently a lot of people said they related to the poem xD!
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:iconsorbetberry:
SorbetBerry Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist
are you in love capu? :eyes:
but seriously, this is very good! it could easily be a song :D
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
lol no I wouldn't say that xD
but amg thank you!
amgg seriously that has to be the second comment saying that!
who knows maybe I'll write a song someday
I WROTE ONE ABOUT TREES no joke
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:iconsorbetberry:
SorbetBerry Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist
ohoho
and hehe xD
OMG I want to hear it omgggg
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:iconcapukat:
Capukat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013   General Artist
LOL

it goes somethin like this alskdhfh
//might actually make a youtube vid as ajoke for it

"there was a tree on the farm and it got killed by the farrrmerrrr,

the very next day it got turned into white paperrr"

///psst that's it
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SorbetBerry Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist
OMG that's adorable o3o
<3
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